Since I don't often comment up on cfud_concrit, this post will be always up on the top of this journal. Crit for Athrun, Dearka and Canon goes here, IP logging is off. Feel free to be open and blunt! Crit is always acceptable no matter what about.

( Haro^2 Tori^2 subs. )

( Quirks of Play Meme. )

( Combat Info: Athrun. )

( Combat Info: Dearka. )

( Permissions Meme. )

Swiped from Shinn's journal. Throw in a word for each category (and note which character or characters you're doing this for) from your perspective as a player and if you ask, I’ll do the same for your character or characters.

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Version 2.0: Comment here with your characters and I'll reply with what my characters think of yours (assuming they've met).

You wanted to speak to me?

You're either a scapegoat or part of a very clever pack of wolves, Miss Sohma.

You're a confirmed sheep, as far as I know, and Colonel Fllaga's departure leaves us as the only safes. I'm unlocking the private conversation I had with him to you; as I said to him, I trust your discretion in using the information.

My current suspicions are still on Killua, now that the clue has come in, and I have reason to believe that both Rin and Reynolds are more sheep than wolf.

We're both sheep, and the chances are that one of us will be taken by the wolves by the first round; I've set down the points so far in the post before this, as well as my true actions. If I'm no longer here by the next round, I trust your judgement in the use and dispensation of that info, Colonel.

There's something about those three, though.

Comment here for Athrun and Dearka, though I warn you that I might not remember everything important about their relationships with you. XD

Emo: cold